For the love of a pit. *Work in progress*

By Cutting_for_Freedom

I feel the music
Rising through my body.
The beats,
Giving my movements
A whole new sound.
The dancing, so strange,
Emotional bodies raging all around.
A beautiful mess
In a black filled spectrum.
My being enveloped,
In a wonderous array of pugnent scents.
Race, color, gender, beliefs
Are non-existant in a sweaty heat.
For I finally found my home,
In the heart of a mosh pit.

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© 2006 Cutting_for_Freedom
Published on Wednesday, November 15, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Mylissa On Wednesday, November 15, 2006, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    I love the how this piece is turning out. It is refreshing and it makes me feel like I am there.

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