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A Laissez-faire Affair
By Rebel_not_Radical
The crescent moon was dialed against
The starry skied tempest, restless
Asking directions from my wrist watch
"hey, hey..."
it whispered in ethereal mists to me
Becaused I traversed paradoxically
In the universe streets of infinity
Zipper in boots and loose change in faded jeans
Jingle like happy fools on lunatical elation
If I breath enough maybe my
Chest cavity will burst out with laughs
So I sniffed some more milky way stars
Or did I light another cigarette from mardi gras
But I think i'll walk on by bit-by-bit
Sometimes life seems to get us down
And I want to stop living in my dream
A dream of ultramarine
"hey, hey..."
it licked some words in my ears
~"Go ahead lay down dead"~
Because I want to pass on by
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© 2006 Tetch de la Cruz
Published on Monday, September 18, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Laissez-faire Affair"
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A former member wrote:
"Asking directions from my wrist watch" Psychedelic, trippy, eccentric off-the-wall and just wasy cool...i felt like floating in a stick of bubble gum. A love when poetry workds like this: like paintings! Nice.
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, K_Love
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wrote:
Your talent always shines through, your words so uniquely different and I love your style and the imagery you paint so beautiful. "If I breathe enough maybe my chest cavity will burst out with laughs"
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
I wish I could spend a day with you and your thoughts. This is so great Tetch hun. Awesome piece... Julia~
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
The rhythm of this piece is fantastic, I especially liked the fourth stanza... Ciao, T/S
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I very much like the quote on your homepage, as well - "The first man to compare a woman's cheek to a rose is a poet; the second one was an idiot"...no truer words written...
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