A Laissez-faire Affair

By Rebel_not_Radical

The crescent moon was dialed against
The starry skied tempest, restless
Asking directions from my wrist watch



"hey, hey..."
it whispered in ethereal mists to me



Becaused I traversed paradoxically
In the universe streets of infinity
Zipper in boots and loose change in faded jeans
Jingle like happy fools on lunatical elation


If I breath enough maybe my
Chest cavity will burst out with laughs
So I sniffed some more milky way stars
Or did I light another cigarette from mardi gras


But I think i'll walk on by bit-by-bit
Sometimes life seems to get us down
And I want to stop living in my dream
A dream of ultramarine



"hey, hey..."
it licked some words in my ears



~"Go ahead lay down dead"~
Because I want to pass on by



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© 2006 Tetch de la Cruz
Published on Monday, September 18, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "Asking directions from my wrist watch" Psychedelic, trippy, eccentric off-the-wall and just wasy cool...i felt like floating in a stick of bubble gum. A love when poetry workds like this: like paintings! Nice.

  • K_Love On Monday, September 18, 2006, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Your talent always shines through, your words so uniquely different and I love your style and the imagery you paint so beautiful. "If I breathe enough maybe my chest cavity will burst out with laughs"

  • TaintedButterfly On Monday, September 18, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    I wish I could spend a day with you and your thoughts. This is so great Tetch hun. Awesome piece... Julia~

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, September 18, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    The rhythm of this piece is fantastic, I especially liked the fourth stanza... Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, September 18, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    I very much like the quote on your homepage, as well - "The first man to compare a woman's cheek to a rose is a poet; the second one was an idiot"...no truer words written... Scholar

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