Watch her break

By StAinedNblood

Chaoticly designed
Spinning, eyes to the sky
Silently waiting for the breath of forgiveness
Floating in her mind
Like spirals of embrace and loneliness

But nothing can break the trance of sinful tears
She's tainted with reject
Stained in his hypnotic eyes
Close your eyes
Let yourself fall inside
Begin to dream
While she's becoming the victim of memory

As her eyes fall into the pain
So black, like her smoky mascara mask
A masquerade in her mind
Nothing's real in a world of painted visions

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© 2006 StAinedNblood
Published on Monday, September 11, 2006.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • HeadpatSlut On Wednesday, March 24, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    Very nice, I like the imagery you use here, this sounds like it would make a great Metal song. Write the fuck on! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: "Nothing's real in a world of painted visions" It's just the paint that makes the agony of a beating, broken heart so real...this piece is like an omen to the way things might turn out for me...excellent write. ~*Beth*~ Scholar

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