I Looked Into The Soul Of A Woman

By A Burning God

I looked into the soul of a woman, and saw her future,
Bright and promising,
I looked into the soul of a woman, and saw who she was,
a hard-working woman, ready for the world
I looked into the soul of a woman, and felt her sadness,
for she couldn't get to her future
I looked into the soul of a woman, saw her life
she exuded an aura of sorrow
I looked into the soul of a woman, and saw her family
they missed her terribly
I looked into the soul of a woman, and felt her aura
it told me that she wasn't happy with her decisions
I looked into the soul of a woman, and I felt horrible
for she wouldn't amount to much, despite the talent that she possessed

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© 2006 The_Demon
Published on Saturday, September 2, 2006.     Filed under:
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  • Mari On Wednesday, September 6, 2006, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    shit happens

  • A former member wrote: breathe life into that soul *alone*

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