Friendship

By HalfDarkAngel

once I sat in a group
of people who called themselves
my friends

a group who'd always
be there when they were needed
yeah right

there cam a time when
I was hurting really badly
the're nowhere

i found one of them
and asked for help but he was
"too busy"

now i sit alone, no group
i never really needed them anyway
(yeah right)

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© 2006 HalfDarkAngel
Published on Tuesday, May 16, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i so know ow it goes. and those who know how it is, find strength in others like them...

  • Rhys Ki On Wednesday, December 5, 2007, Rhys Ki (68)By person wrote:

    Good write. I know how this feels, and so do many others, and that helps...

  • A former member wrote: awww, yes...to ask for help when it's most needed, to reach for a hand and get rejected because of a "friends" personal issues...a thing I know too well. Wonderful portrayal...~*Beth*~

  • inexperienced On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, inexperienced (26)By person wrote:

    you have a naive tone in this poem,and I like that.

  • inexperienced On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, inexperienced (26)By person wrote:

    so you experienced like many of us.having friends in sunny days and losing them when it rains.most people are afraid of getting wet,aren't they?but still,it's a good way to choose the real friends among em.

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