Friendship
By HalfDarkAngel
once I sat in a group
of people who called themselves
my friends
a group who'd always
be there when they were needed
yeah right
there cam a time when
I was hurting really badly
the're nowhere
i found one of them
and asked for help but he was
"too busy"
now i sit alone, no group
i never really needed them anyway
(yeah right)
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© 2006 HalfDarkAngel
Published on Tuesday, May 16, 2006.
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A former member wrote:
i so know ow it goes. and those who know how it is, find strength in others like them...
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On Wednesday, December 5, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
Good write. I know how this feels, and so do many others, and that helps...
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A former member wrote:
awww, yes...to ask for help when it's most needed, to reach for a hand and get rejected because of a "friends" personal issues...a thing I know too well. Wonderful portrayal...~*Beth*~
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, inexperienced
(26) wrote:
you have a naive tone in this poem,and I like that.
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, inexperienced
(26) wrote:
so you experienced like many of us.having friends in sunny days and losing them when it rains.most people are afraid of getting wet,aren't they?but still,it's a good way to choose the real friends among em.