erotica

By inexperienced

At night, all through my body

This storm breaks out

Tearing my soul in parts

Calling out your name

A message is all you see

In a small frame

By digital letters

With a mechanical tone

Although my heart is torn apart

I already washed my hair

I already wore your favorite dress

I already packed my stuff up

I know it is just not gonna happen

I know that it is just not enough.

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Published on Monday, May 8, 2006. Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"

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Comments on "erotica"

A former member wrote: so much raw desire... i'm shaking .. good job :D
On Sunday, July 8, 2007, carlosjackal (2794) wrote:

This was loaded and electric, full of desire. Brilliant write. -Carl
On Sunday, March 25, 2007, Enigma (90) wrote:

Good work. I like it.
On Wednesday, July 19, 2006, TaintedButterfly (668) wrote:

This is something I believe all of us as women do... and it's sad that we can't dress us to please us instead! This was a powerful piece hun. *faves* Julia~
On Wednesday, July 19, 2006, TaintedButterfly (668) wrote:

up to* I shoulda faved this the first time... ;) Brilliant.
On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, PoeticHellion (191) wrote:

Excellent.
On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, TaintedButterfly (668) wrote:

Omg- Do I know & feel those words! You wrote, what I think, we all feel but cannot express the way you just did so perfectly! Julia~
On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Graveyard_Desciple (39) wrote:

i agree. a great piece of writing if i must say. and i too welcome you
On Monday, May 8, 2006, inexperienced (26) wrote:

thankx! :) my lack of experience does not refer to that (!) hopefully..
A former member wrote: I must admit... a poem called 'erotica' by a person with a screen name 'inexperienced' made me laugh at first... but this is much more than any one word can describe.. very nice and welcome to dp ;)