love letters

By heart broken suicide

(girl writing)
i miss those times
of when we were in love
and i didnt write these stupid ryhmes
why did he do this to me?
why did he cause all this pain?
vant he see that i love him?
just why cant he see..
its so obvious
like the silence that surrounds me...
passing by the feild where we use to lay
makes me cry
even to this day
i can never go a thunderstorm
with out thinking of you
i love him
now that youve said goodbye
i could never say hello
i love him
and i hope he knows

(guy writing)
i can barely remeber those times we walked in the rain
when the rain washed away the tears and the hurt
i didnt mean to hurt her
i still look back
to her lovely face
so alive and full of love
now only to see her cry
makes me feel all cold inside
i love her
but now that ive said goodbye
i need a chance to say hello
i love her
but she will never know



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© 2006 heart broken suicide
Published on Friday, April 28, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: amazing

  • Savannah On Friday, April 28, 2006, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    God, this makes my heart hurt. Awesome.

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