death by love

By Frater Synth




back in the day of old i thouht i knew what i wanted was only u but now felings new my love for you causeing more pain than i ever knew. i can't feel the way i did b4 time won't heal me ne more. hideing away my fears nd anger jus won't help me ne more. nd my love 4 her throwing my life out of wack thrusting me deeper into darkness. i am merly a shadow of what i once was my soal broken down further each nd every day tryin my hardest 2 show her how much i love nd care 4 her but she ignores me . Hear me out now You're gonna listen to me, like it or not....




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Published on Sunday, April 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: YOU FUCKING DICK!! Its guys like you that give guys a bad name, You fucking Wanna Be Player. Go Fuck Yourself!!!][ ][ BITCH!

  • A former member wrote: hmmm...finished or no, it's definately a powerful write. I especially enjoyed the line, "i can't feel the way i did b4 time won't heal me ne more." Very wonderful. *Evangel*

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