Pick Your Rose

By Muse

Roses drowning in their own passions
Thorns bleeding black down the razored stems

Butterflies with flaming wings alight on
Silken petals deceptively inviting
Plush cushions on which lords rest
For them to suck the sweet life away

Sugared copper to flow through their bodies
Lifting deadened souls to insanity
Maddened laughter lights the air
Sparking through the pressing velvet darkness

Shadows close around to mock the light
And smother it with sinister glee
Listen to its wails of strangled terror
As it slowly cracks
Crushed beneath the weight of its ever-present
.nemesis.



Pick Your Rose
And
In Turn
Your Demise

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© 2006 Muse
Published on Monday, March 27, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: nice

  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, April 18, 2006, mywristshurt (408)By person wrote:

    its beautiful.. i like it

  • Equinox Asylum On Tuesday, March 28, 2006, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    The sweet smell cuts my throat with "...sinister glee." A garden of flowering images. Fantastic.

  • A former member wrote: Captivating. The imagery invoked is just...wow. You have a gift :)

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Monday, March 27, 2006, Lady Grinning Soul (145)By person wrote:

    this is really moving and good. it just captivated me

  • Dissolving Poet On Monday, March 27, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    You captivate me in your poetry, the flow the music that plays in my head just sweeps me away to anywhere you want with your poetry...

  • RubyXero On Monday, March 27, 2006, RubyXero (484)By person wrote:

    damn...instant favorite. that poem was just...beautiful, excellent...moving. loved it.:)

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