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In Death
By virginalnympho
Staring at the ghastly sight
The people force fake tears to pour
The destination of her final flight
Was a sorrow covered concrete floor
Her eyes were still wide open
Burrowing into their heartless souls
Every limb on her body was broken
But finally she felt whole
Her escape was one of drastic measures
She felt trapped with few choices
Her broken heart had no hope for cures
And she couldn't silent the bitter voices
They screamed of pain and isolation
Ripped her apart from within
Forcing her into her own destruction
Had her clawing at her bruised skin
Her final moments were spent in fear
The evidence was locked in her eyes
All her insecurites were now clear
And in death, she no longer held any lies
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© 2006 virginalnympho
Comments on "In Death"
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On Friday, March 24, 2006, Cassandra
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wrote:
Outstanding piece, and as already said, depressing at the same time. This partially inspired an upcoming piece that I know I'll be writing probably in a few minutes.. Well done, I love it.
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A former member wrote:
brutally sad...pure sorrow knows no bounds but finds expression here
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
such a powerfully depressing piece... its still amazing and unbelievable. great piece...
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On Thursday, March 2, 2006, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
vary sorrowful, almost painful to read, but nicely written. well done.~~~Grave
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On Wednesday, March 1, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
That poem took my breath away....
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On Wednesday, March 1, 2006, etarnally damnd
(61) wrote:
great poem. *and in death, she no longer held any lies" one of the best lines.-grave.
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On Wednesday, March 1, 2006, Christopher7xii
(20) wrote:
Incredibly sad write. I feel a great sorrow for anyone that feels that is the only way to escape, it hurts like hell to be in that spot. Thanks for sharing this.
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