Suddenly I See...

By Crimson Shade

Suddenly I see what lies beneath your eyes,
Was it my compromise that bred your lies?

Suddenly I see that you take and never give,
Was that the way I’m supposed to live?

Suddenly I see that I have been abused,
Was it my innocence that you used?

Suddenly you see that I’ve been crying,
It was because I was trying.

Suddenly I see that you were the pain inside of me,
That is why I’m leaving you for me.

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© 2006 Crimson Shade
Published on Thursday, February 16, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mnemora On Thursday, February 22, 2007, Mnemora (8)By person wrote:

    I'm kinda new to dp, but this is definitly one of the most inspiring works I've read here.(moth bows, humbled)

  • TaintedButterfly On Saturday, October 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly (675)By person wrote:

    I miss you, friend.

  • The Crimson Queen On Saturday, May 20, 2006, The Crimson Queen (928)By person wrote:

    I really liked this, I felt a bit of my own life wrapped up within it's few lines. The ending being one of such strength, to be able to walk away from something. This was incredible!

  • TaintedButterfly On Wednesday, April 5, 2006, TaintedButterfly (675)By person wrote:

    I'm reading this again.... You just have such a beautiful way of putting emotions down. It touches my soul so profoundly. I hope all is well m'dear. *hugs* ♥Julia~

  • darkdesires On Monday, February 27, 2006, darkdesires (144)By person wrote:

    wow... powerful... and has corny as it sounds... I can feel this dead on. I love how you can actually articulate this so beautifully.

  • Future of Despond On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, Future of Despond (73)By person wrote:

    Where better to look for friends than in yourself?

  • island warrior On Monday, February 20, 2006, island warrior (216)By person wrote:

    Ended on a positive note.

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, February 17, 2006, TaintedButterfly (675)By person wrote:

    omg Crim! That is so touching and utterly saddened my soul. Sometimes it's hard to do things for ourselves. You should be proud hun. This is bittersweet. Beautiful just like you. *hugs* Julia~

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, February 16, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    Awwww*Hugs Crimson* that was beautiful and sad and full of sorrow it made my heart cry out for you

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