Darkness Overcomes Me

By A Burning God

I’m sitting outside,
Darkness all around me,
(Inside and out)
I’m hearing voices in my head
They’re telling me dark things, things that Darkness comes up with.
But, it’s not the darkness. It’s the blades in my hands.
They crave to be quenched of their thirst in this darkness.
And, Darkness wants to have some fun.
All of the darknesses want him to kill
To become the master of the blades
To become the best assassin ever,
Instilling fear when they hear his name,
For everyone fears the Darkness.

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© 2006 Andrew Hayes
Published on Wednesday, January 18, 2006.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • Forgotten Angel On Saturday, January 21, 2006, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    i like it...i thought i've seen it somewhere..its very good, a bit scary 2 me..but its really good...keep up the good work bro! -Kel

  • A former member wrote: I like it even though you use the word darkness alot....it kinda loses the feeling

  • A Burning God On Thursday, January 19, 2006, A Burning God (46)By person wrote:

    I just took this from my account on Poetly, where my username is "Darkness"

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