Your face

By weyvern

His face is above me as i stare
up at the roof from my floor
I tell me everytime to bewear
Dont let it hurt you no more
floating in a fantacy where
you love me always forever more
I suppose you dont really care
but thinking of you at my door
tapping it musicaly, standing there
you must understand that never before
has anyone made me feel so bare
i can hide nothing your eyes bore
through my mind, its almost unfare
you see my everything m central core
and i..
i see your face
your face as i stare

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© 2005 weyvern
Published on Monday, December 26, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • veingo On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    It's amazing how for each of us, there is someone who can always make you feel like an open book. Great write. ^V^

  • Myrrhkuri the fallen one On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (94)By person wrote:

    good write! keep it up.

  • A former member wrote: damn i understand oh gods do i understand

  • dead_inside On Monday, December 26, 2005, dead_inside (32)By person wrote:

    ive had this feeling too...you could so be my twin...but you dont look like me and youre not the same age...anyway, its a good write, well done. and you do have talent!

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