my venus

By weyvern

Loving you and belonging to you
I hate you and loath you
stop staring at me
you are not me
I hate you cuz you're me
and thats why I cant love you
You are my venus
my venus fly trap
I cut you I damage you
I do everything I can to you
but all the pain comes to me
Because in cutting you i damage me
I hate you cuz you're me
and because I cant hurt you
You are my Venus
My venus Death Trap

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© 2005 weyvern
Published on Monday, December 26, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • veingo On Tuesday, December 27, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    This one, along with "mirror mirror" reminds me of a poem I wrote a long time ago. I know the feeling. ^V^

  • A former member wrote: i like this piece. i know what this feels like. "I hate you cuz you're me and thats why I cant love you" good write

  • dead_inside On Monday, December 26, 2005, dead_inside (32)By person wrote:

    i like this, it sounds like me, i hope you dont really feel like that, you shouldnt coz youre a great person, take care

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