in my deepest dream

By dismal silence

hot and sweaty
damn get ready
rub my clit
bit my tit
grab my sides
feel our vibes
as you glide
so, so deep within
i...
I... cry
I... scream
God this is like a dream
steaming sweat
keep going boy, cant be done yet
this rush within
keeps me moaning again and again
i...
I... cry
I... scream
God!!!
how you make me scream
in my deepest dream


one of my older works....

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© 2005 hushed_sanity
Published on Saturday, December 24, 2005.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: erotic are often the best peices because well its full of emotion...and the best things in life are anyways this was great nice work

  • A former member wrote: Wonderful flow. I like... a lot. And I'm saying that post-orgasm... so u know it's true =)

  • weyvern On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    i agree with veingo it is a definate change of pace but very well written. reminds me of Anne Rice actually

  • veingo On Saturday, December 24, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Wooooah! I was NOT expecting that. What a change of pace, I like it. ;)- ^V^

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