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"Savage & Saint"
By Grim_Sorrow
right & wrong
savage and saint
figment and fact
false barriers
an attempt
in essence
to assure ones dominance
seperate oneself from our primal right
to be ungoverned
free of influence
unobscured
yet odly
we help to build this wall
and for every brick taken asunder
two more assume its place
society is failing
freedom is falling
our primitive ways
though natural
have become an abomination
unacceptable in this pericarp of life
this phantasm of hope
forced evolution
not of body as was intended
but of will
understanding
self purpose
an affirmation of ones diluted sense of superiority
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© 2005 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Saturday, November 19, 2005.
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Comments on ""Savage & Saint""
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A former member wrote:
well said. man driven beneath slavery by his unrefined, unenlightened, animalistic instincts. i enjoy your thrust, drive and angle. really good medicine for the mind.
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On Monday, January 15, 2007, Sin
(1168)
wrote:
our self-castrating society is our downfall..we put too much faith in structures that subdue us instead of sticking to instincts..i say fuck it all lets just run around naked ;) ~kristy
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On Sunday, November 20, 2005, coly
(54) wrote:
love it its aswome and true
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On Saturday, November 19, 2005, Grim_Sorrow
(75) wrote:
lol... sadly i've never read lord of the flies... found it dull... guess i can give it another chance *heads to bookstore*
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On Saturday, November 19, 2005, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Could not help but think of "Lord Of The Flies" while reading this. ~ mw
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On Saturday, November 19, 2005, AAA
(17) wrote:
No doubt, I thought of that and then by reading your comment it really reinforces the fact.
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