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Drunken Mind
By A Burning God
Everything that I’ve been told is a lie,
From how you don’t want me as a boyfriend to my levels of insanity.
I don’t know who to turn to,
Who to trust.
My mind is a complete mess,
I’m shaking from confusion.
Glimpses of “truths” cloud me,
I don’t know what to think.
You suggested that I get some help,
(But the truth is, I’ve tried, and I cannot trust the psychiatrists)
And my faults keep me from assistance,
I’m too stubborn to accept most help.
No one fights my battles for me,
So my proposal is thus:
Let me fight my demons alone,
I do not need help,
Because then you will become their target, too.
And losing both of us is something that I cannot bear.
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© 2005 Andrew Hayes
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On Monday, December 12, 2005, Nail Bunny
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wrote:
I've said it and will again. you can trust me, even though that's not what you want to hear right now. I liked this piece... it shows a lot of emotions, not just anger, and that is a rare thing... well done.
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On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, Thorn
(283) wrote:
That's harsh, man. You can trust me. I am your friend, and I want only the best for you.
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On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, A Burning God
(46) wrote:
I probably should have worded that differently, but that was the feeling for the moment
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On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
i dont trust psychiatrists either... this is very sweet..at the end..n you kno you've always got me, to help even if it is a lil...and what a right..its cluing ppl into how you feel..and i for one wanna help you, in any way possible..cuz i care.. -Kel
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