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The Hunger
By Ablebody Peckawood
As she gazed deep into my eyes, she saw the revelation of murderous surprise!
She told me she loved me, and that was her last mistake. Now her body and
soul was mine to take! I sank my incisors deeply into her throat. Now she
is mine forever, and mine to control. She is endlessly damned and I own
her soul.
The snare was set and her toe was in. Her hunger for my love will never
end.
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Ablebody Peckawood
Published on Thursday, October 6, 2005.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
I am quite taken with your style of writing.. it's increasingly captivating and the contrast of such final words as these with the almost light-hearted delivery is somehow delectable. I cannot explain it rightly, but appreciate it. Clever, oh-so clever.
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A former member wrote:
i love how incredibly morbid this is... sort of makes me want to suck somebodies blood. in fact..........
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A former member wrote:
very cool, i love the last sentence... sums up the whole poem... really good write, enjoyed it...
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, mysticventures
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wrote:
wonderful vampiric write :[
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