Broken

By Crysa

Overwhelmed with confusion,
hatred, and anger,
tarnished illusion,
the signs of danger.

Brimming with emotions
bottled inside,
Divided devotion
I'm trying to hide.

My world is crumbling,
falling apart.
I'm stumbling,
blindly, in the dark.

Trying to be strong,
patient, willing,
doesnt belong
with what I am dealing.

Feeling so shaken,
empty, broken,
missing, taken,
my heart a token.

Hear the echoing,
hollow sound,
thin string dangling
above the ground.

Harsh winds streaming,
blowing fierce.
Voices screaming,
my soul, pierced.



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Copyright 2005 Crysa
Published on Saturday, October 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    I'm super jealous, I wish I could rhyme like this, much less getting a poem that rhymes to flow so smoothly, this was very nice, and easy to read, but the content is heart wrenching, indecision and confusion can be the death of so much... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: very nice rhythem and rhyming.. i think you could be my favorite writter. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: VERY GOOD. WELL WRITTEN AND THE RHYMING AND RHYTHEM IS OUTSTANDING Scholar

  • A former member wrote: *dances beneath the rains of your falling soul* Not to be perverse, but that is what I feel like doing after reading this piece. Wonderful imagery Crysa, I am going to go dance a waltz now. *Evangel* Scholar

  • CrestfallenTears On Saturday, October 1, 2005, CrestfallenTears (17)By person wrote:

    hmm. I enjoyed this. It is really good. Its got a certain thing that makes it stand out, but I am not sure what it is yet

  • A former member wrote: It has a certain tone to it that I can just relate to.. I like it and It just blows me away... far more greater then me...Beautiful

  • Err0r On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    Such an amazing visual author you are. I enjoyed such vivid imagery popping into my photographic memory from this piece. Great work.

  • ApathysKiss On Saturday, October 1, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    a solemn and somber piece...the rhyming skill added to its monotony like what has happened or you've experienced occurs too often...it's what effect i got anyway...excellent descriptive lines also, relative to sound and pain. ~m~

  • blue On Saturday, October 1, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    hmm,, I usually don't like a complete rhyming poem, but this all just fits together nicely. ~b

  • Crysa On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Crysa (33)By person wrote:

    So kind. ;)

  • blue On Saturday, October 1, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    seriously :)

  • Crysa On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Crysa (33)By person wrote:

    Thanks. :)

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