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" 3:00 am "
By Grim_Sorrow
" 3:00 am "
tell me this
oh utter hue
the faded wretch
withdrawn
Ascend By 2's
the tattered wings
of caffein dreams
far gone
Fuck this world
your sense of life
this intelect
forbade
embrace the words
my state of mind
these thoughts
from which we fade
awake to feed
the hate
the fear
the fuel from which most flee
set ablaze
the light of truth
embrace your tragedy
a word
uncouth
befitting youth
the age from which we stray
an honest end
for which we strafe
For Nonexistent days
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Copyright 2005 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Tuesday, September 13, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
amazing.. each line reads a wider meaning.. I have to keep rereading for it to sink in.. this style greatly affects my head.
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On Saturday, November 19, 2005, manywalks
(747)
wrote:
Summed up and ended perfectly with the last line, "For Nonexistent days"; it tied it in a neat little bow. ~ mw
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On Friday, November 18, 2005, coly
(54) wrote:
nice i like your vocabulary
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On Friday, October 7, 2005, Kali Ma
(43) wrote:
This piece has an awesome flow. I especially love the lines: "Ascend By 2's /the tattered wings/of caffein dreams" Very Beautiful. ~ Asheai
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On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, Grim_Sorrow
(74) wrote:
I accidentally deleted this one... sorry to those of you who marked it as one of your Favs... N e way... its back now.
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On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, redtearswhitesnow
(79) wrote:
wow,just wow.....This is an awesome piece,i dont even know what to say heh.
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