Ramblings of a Lonely Woman

By The_Lady_in_the_Fire

He's asleep,
he's so cute when he's asleep...
But that's not the point.
The point is,
I'm
Lonely.

Don't know why.
He's there.
Not 5 feet away.
If I put the laptop down,
and stretch out my arm,
(and almost slide off the couch)
I can touch him.

But that doesn't change how I feel.
That doesnt numb the ache in my heart.
I'm not alone.
I'm
Just
Lonely.

I was so happy,
only a few hours ago.
He was awake.
He was talking to me.
His eyes were looking into mine.
Looking into me.
The ache inside wasn't there.

At least I don't think it was there.


*sigh*

At least I have the puppy
To keep me company.
But where is that silly mutt?
Oh well.
I won't say it again.
It was the last time I'll say it...




im
lonely



(I lied)

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Copyright 2005 The_Lady_in_the_Fire
Published on Thursday, August 11, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Lotophagi On Wednesday, September 21, 2005, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    wonderful write.... you conveyed that feeling so eloquently.... I think DoctorAsh said it well. this piece is just beautiful. Thank you.

  • DoctorAsh On Thursday, August 25, 2005, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    I have felt this way from time to time as well. It's like somewhere inside someone or something just, pulled the plug. Leaving us feeling unattached, or disconnected from something that should be greater, yet, we long to be absorbed by others, constantly.

  • A former member wrote: This is lovely.

  • peril_notion On Friday, August 12, 2005, peril_notion (88)By person wrote:

    wow......

  • saellem On Friday, August 12, 2005, saellem (21)By person wrote:

    that was beautiful....... i wish when i was lonely he was in arms reach.

  • blue On Friday, August 12, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    So wake him up! ~b

  • A former member wrote: this was very good and heartfelt

  • Serenity On Thursday, August 11, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    I absolutly loved this. So much so I have nothing decent to say. Lovely job :)

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