Missing her much (posted a day to soon)

By down-sx-ft

Why do I do it?
Why do I go through it?
Why must she be away
and cause this hurt today?
In this war,
out so far,
away from the one
who is my poison.
Drowning in fear
with her not here.
Going to loose my mind
if her smile I don't find.
Missing her more
I fall to the floor,
crying out please
bring her to me.
Missing her much,
awaiting her touch.
Just can't wait untill it'll be
just her and just me.





well... she left me shortly after I posted this

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Copyright 2005 down-sx-ft
Published on Wednesday, July 13, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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Comments on "Missing her much (posted a day to soon)"

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  • BeautifulCalamity On Monday, July 25, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    aww, that's sad.. the ending was so sweet and beautiful, very nicely written.

  • ONEANDLONELY On Monday, July 25, 2005, ONEANDLONELY (114)By person wrote:

    So sad and elloquent. I hope she read this. We all lose someone, someway...Peace.

  • elisa On Friday, July 15, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    nothing hurts more than missing someone in vain....i'm sorry to hear this:(

  • down-sx-ft On Friday, July 15, 2005, down-sx-ft (46)By person wrote:

    Well I posted this to soon because as soon as I posted it she broke up with me.

  • Mahakala On Saturday, July 16, 2005, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    Man talk about timing...sweet...

  • thornyrose On Wednesday, July 13, 2005, thornyrose (23)By person wrote:

    i hope that someday soon can see her again.

  • MidniteBlaze On Wednesday, July 13, 2005, MidniteBlaze (23)By person wrote:

    Used to feel the exact same way man, till I realized it was all a lie...short but sweet, great job.

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