3rd Times A Charm

By down-sx-ft

Confused and suffering
Left with nothing
Arms streched to the sky
Crying out why
To end it all
Down I fall
Lying down in the dirt
Take away the hurt
Barrel to my head
1 "click", 2 "click", 3 "BOOM"... dead

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Published on Thursday, July 7, 2005. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "3rd Times A Charm"

A former member wrote: its like a little game of russian rulet, and evantually... everyone gets the bullet.
On Monday, July 25, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428) wrote:

very to the point , once again a sad piece definitely, but the simple words illustrate the bare emotion. well done.
On Friday, July 8, 2005, Mahakala (207) wrote:

wicked...
On Thursday, July 7, 2005, down-sx-ft (46) wrote:

it malfunctioned for a min. I got it right though.. 3rd times a charm ya know
On Thursday, July 7, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219) wrote:

sweet
On Thursday, July 7, 2005, little butterfly (36) wrote:

this was great im trying not to laugh at the gun not going off the first two times
On Thursday, July 7, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309) wrote:

i like it...the last line reminds me of a song i like..although i cant remember the name or who sings it..and i've felt this way many times...nice write -Kel
On Thursday, July 7, 2005, ShardsofSilence (219) wrote:

yeah nice rhyme scheme ^__^
A former member wrote: sweet
On Thursday, July 7, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood (38) wrote:

This poem rocks I like it!
On Thursday, July 7, 2005, bloody LOVEly (85) wrote:

good rhyme scheme. even though this is one of those "AUGH, i want to kill myself, gimme the gun!" poems, i liked it.