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3rd Times A Charm
By down-sx-ft
Confused and suffering
Left with nothing
Arms streched to the sky
Crying out why
To end it all
Down I fall
Lying down in the dirt
Take away the hurt
Barrel to my head
1 "click", 2 "click", 3 "BOOM"... dead
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Copyright 2005 down-sx-ft
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A former member wrote:
its like a little game of russian rulet, and evantually... everyone gets the bullet.
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On Monday, July 25, 2005, BeautifulCalamity
(428)
wrote:
very to the point , once again a sad piece definitely, but the simple words illustrate the bare emotion. well done.
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On Friday, July 8, 2005, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
wicked...
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, down-sx-ft
(46) wrote:
it malfunctioned for a min. I got it right though.. 3rd times a charm ya know
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
sweet
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, little butterfly
(36) wrote:
this was great im trying not to laugh at the gun not going off the first two times
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
i like it...the last line reminds me of a song i like..although i cant remember the name or who sings it..and i've felt this way many times...nice write -Kel
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
yeah nice rhyme scheme ^__^
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A former member wrote:
sweet
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood
(38) wrote:
This poem rocks I like it!
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On Thursday, July 7, 2005, bloody LOVEly
(86) wrote:
good rhyme scheme. even though this is one of those "AUGH, i want to kill myself, gimme the gun!" poems, i liked it.
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