Colors of Dread

By vaultgrl

Black and red,
This pain begins to spread.
Now red,
My black shirt ripped to shreds.
Now blue, black, and red,
As my face hits the bed.
Now black,
How I’d love to be dead.
I can sew my shirt back with thread.
I can bleach back the sheets on my bed.
But I can’t remove the scars in my head.
Surgery could make my face something I don’t dread.
But I can’t remove the scars from inside my head.
Though not sure I’d want to.
My scars are from the life I’ve led.
No happy memories to be there instead.

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Copyright 2005 vaultgrl
Published on Sunday, June 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wonderfully written!

  • Niemand On Sunday, December 30, 2007, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    This was awesome! I'm loving the rhyme scheme...-Gin

  • monalisamarie On Thursday, April 20, 2006, monalisamarie (113)By person wrote:

    I love the contrast in this...lovely..

  • A former member wrote: Yeah! Awesome, chick!

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, August 13, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    good rhyming flow and a killer idea... without those scars you wouldn't be you...

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, August 13, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    oh yeah, by the way, I'm so jealous of your member number! 10,000... lucky you. I wanna be 666 :(

  • vaultgrl On Monday, August 15, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    lol, thanks.... I wonder who 666 is anyways, lol

  • Adam On Saturday, January 7, 2006, Adam (241)By person wrote:

    "Sorry, this profile is not currently available [back]".... thought you should know... they nolonger exsist Scholar

  • vaultgrl On Monday, June 20, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ...thanks....:P

  • A former member wrote: The emotions jump off the screen...wonderful absolutely wonderful

  • Serenity On Sunday, June 19, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    This was... well besides sad, great. I love everything about this. nice job :)

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