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Drip Slip Ride
By vaultgrl
Drip drop drip,
Watch the needle slip.
Drip drop drip,
Pull the blade thru quick.
Slip slip slide,
Let this feeling ride.
Slip slip slide,
My emotions glide.
Ride ride ride,
Car drifting to the side.
Ride ride ride,
Decision-lets collide.
Drip drop drip,
Reality beginning to rip.
Drip drop drip,
All the drama skipped.
Drip drop drip.
Slip slip slide.
Ride ride ride.
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Copyright 2005 vaultgrl
Published on Thursday, June 16, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Drip Slip Ride"
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161)
wrote:
oooh... i like this one... it makes me think... *pondering* drug trip or car crash? both?
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A former member wrote:
You know that I love this poem a lot because it reminds me a lot of what I went through. I don't really care for a lot of repitition but it somehow works with this poem.idk, but i like it
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
Very effective write; the repetition and rhythm brings real pace to this. I like the ... endlessness (?can't think of better descriptive) of the conclusion...it feels circular somehow... Great write, anyway. :)
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On Sunday, October 2, 2005, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
Amazing. I loved the repition of the words and even the rhyming. Not one for rhyming poetry as I've said before...but I love this piece.
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A former member wrote:
intense...I related a lot to it...absolutely wonderful
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On Thursday, June 16, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
...thank you!!
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On Thursday, June 16, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Powerful write :)
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