Love Lost

By Soulfire

Who needs your smiles
Who needs your touch
Who needs your promises if they don't mean much

Who wants your laughter
Who wants you to care
When you are needed the most you are never there

Who needs your kisses
Who needs your eyes
Who needs you to speak when you speak only lies

Who wants your passion
Who wants your sorrow
Who would risk it if you won't be there tomorrow

Give up now and avoid the mass delusion
Love in life is but a sick illusion

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Copyright 2005 Soulfire
Published on Tuesday, May 31, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Butterfly On Friday, July 22, 2005, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    Beautiful write of bitterness...You'll find it though, don't worry, it's out there.

  • Mr King On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    hang on my friend... take your time... what you are looking for is out there... its just a rare find... 1LOVE, Seth

  • MidniteBlaze On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, MidniteBlaze (23)By person wrote:

    Awesome write, well told.

  • A former member wrote: I love it, its almost a perfect discription of one of my past relationships, good work!

  • Labitina On Tuesday, May 31, 2005, Labitina (37)By person wrote:

    Wow! Bitter yet beautiful, I've felt the same way before, awesome write ~Christina

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