Breaking Point
By Lord Kalgalath
I wrote this while I was trying to run the house, while my father was out
on detachment, and I was feeling quite inadequate to the task, so before
anyone rips me for the content.. yeah, I know its kinda self indulgent
and blech.
Thanks for reading my work =D
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Sometimes I reach a point where I feel I can't take it anymore.
I feel the pressure of life on every inch of me, crushing me.
Unbearable, inescapable, bearing me down til I must kneel
And sometimes a friend will make it better, make the worlds care dissappear
Sometimes an "I Love You" from one I care for sends my fears fleeing
But sometimes it doesn't, It builds and it builds until I feel I MUST yeild
But to who?
Sometimes I long for oblivion, sometimes I seek pain.
But no matter what i seek for allevation of my discontent, It is never
enough
So I continue plodding on mindlessly, hearing the cold, empty comfort of
It'll get better...
But somehow it never does.
Not for very long.
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Comments on "Breaking Point"
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On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
You can't help feelings like this when you're under pressure like that. It doesn't hurt to express it and we all love when you express it
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A former member wrote:
Yeah.... More often than not there are no "I Love You"s strong enough to make it ok....- Rawk
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A former member wrote:
no doubt... good post