[x]pacing in a[white light][x]

By murder_in_clubland

minds racing

can you feel the imagery

on your neck?

my breath...

holding silent

its so uncomfortable

lying next to you

not holding you clos[er]

even though i can feel your heartbeat

[beating]in my skull...

asphixiation.antidote.

we stood outside kissing

even though it was just so cold.

and you kissed me.

taste of metal filled my mouth.

taste of death

your poisonous seed

released within me.

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Copyright 2005 Schiz0phrenic_Jesus
Published on Tuesday, March 22, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    "feel the imagery on your neck" - very cool and creative notion. Nice piece! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: do you AJ Davis? Scholar

  • A former member wrote: e-mail me please at destiny_carper1000@ yahoo.com Scholar

  • murder_in_clubland On Wednesday, March 23, 2005, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    may I ask why?

  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    wow..

  • Solace On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    Asphyxiation not asphixiation...other than that this was interesting in a strange symbolic way...

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