[x]pacing in a[white light][x]
By murder_in_clubland
minds racing
can you feel the imagery
on your neck?
my breath...
holding silent
its so uncomfortable
lying next to you
not holding you clos[er]
even though i can feel your heartbeat
[beating]in my skull...
asphixiation.antidote.
we stood outside kissing
even though it was just so cold.
and you kissed me.
taste of metal filled my mouth.
taste of death
your poisonous seed
released within me.
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Copyright 2005 Schiz0phrenic_Jesus
Published on Tuesday, March 22, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
"feel the imagery on your neck" - very cool and creative notion. Nice piece! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
do you AJ Davis?
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A former member wrote:
e-mail me please at destiny_carper1000@ yahoo.com
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On Wednesday, March 23, 2005, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
may I ask why?
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On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
wow..
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On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Asphyxiation not asphixiation...other than that this was interesting in a strange symbolic way...