dead inside

By so_skeevy

It’s like I don’t care
Why I’m doomed to this misery
I’ve lost my feeling,
And my soul to apathy

It’s too late to stop it
It’s Consuming my heart
If I stopped breathing now
I doubt I’d care enough to start.

I’m all alone
But I can’t be disturbed
My emotions are dead,
And my future’s been curbed.

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Copyright 2005 so_skeevy
Published on Saturday, March 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • stuart_pid On Wednesday, April 13, 2005, stuart_pid (135)By person wrote:

    nice flow, painfully poigniant without mincing words. well done.

  • Empathy On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, Empathy (22)By person wrote:

    Well said my friend

  • A former member wrote: I know how you feel... "if I stopped breathing now, I doubt I'd care enough to start"--- I like that line especially. - Rawk

  • A former member wrote: nice write

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