Ouch, My kidneys

By so_skeevy

I miss my friends, and the way it used to feel
Now I’m all alone, and none of it seems real.
And now that I’ve lost what I really need
Its time to feel the sting of what it’s like to bleed.
I’ve dried up deep inside, I was scared to let it show
I hope you understand why I’m letting go
Its hard to explain why things must be the way they are
Its hard to accept, it might even leave a scar.
But deep inside yourself I’m sure somewhere you know
That life itself has become my one greatest foe


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Copyright 2005 so_skeevy
Published on Monday, March 14, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: oddly, the title fits the poem.....good job

  • A former member wrote: i like the feeling this has. i was able to relate to this in my own way. great write

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