Adore

By Metal Lullaby


A Sigh
I Die
Inside
I Bide
The time
I Mime
The Rhyme
Please
No Tease
Amore

...Adore...

I say
I pray
Adore
I lay
On the
Bright Moore
In Para-
Blissful
Dise And
I stand
Upon
Mountains
And Spawn
Curtains
Of heaven
With thoughts
Of driven
Amore

...Adore...

I lay
On your
Side, your
Heart, your
Door, Oh
Poor sore
To Im-
Plore, for
The door
To A
Door
A
Moore

...Adore...

Oh, to
Enter
The heart
And do
My Part
To walk
The Moore
And talk
Mi Amore

...Adore...

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Copyright 2005 Metal_Lullaby
Published on Saturday, March 5, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Friday, September 22, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    I love the way this flows. Just gorgeous! :)

  • urbanhumility On Sunday, September 3, 2006, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    an artful flow......well chosen words..........well done..........urban

  • A former member wrote: This is very pretty, true adoration.

  • Nail Bunny On Saturday, July 9, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    wow... that is terrific.

  • sIo On Sunday, March 6, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    i agree with everything said....magnificent!

  • A former member wrote: Nothing short of beautiful

  • A former member wrote: fucking shit. Usually people suck at this. This was wonderful.

  • A former member wrote: agreed

  • AHHH On Saturday, March 5, 2005, AHHH (187)By person wrote:

    wow. serious rhyme-age. very awesome piece you've written here.

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