I Know Your Tricks
By NeverMore
You stare at me with absolute scorn-
As if I've been a screw-up
ever since I was born.
With those pretty blue eyes
you think that you are so smart!
Well I've got news for you,
my little sweetheart-
I know your kind,
I know your tricks.
Thats why Im not surprized
you've turned out a bitch.
Disapointed, I see, that you
couldn't crush my soul.
You thought you could send
me back to my hole.
My glass may be half empty,
while yours is all full-
You didn't know I hide my
strength at the bottom-
Aint that cool?
On your way out, don't let the
door hit your cute ass.
Sorry to tell you babe,
I knew this wouldn't last.
Amazed by my new power,
you turn back to say-
"Honey I'm so sorry,
do you fancy a lay?
Besides- I didn't realize that I really
love you until recent!"
So I say very politely,
"Please go and GET BENT!"
Comments on "I Know Your Tricks"
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A former member wrote:
Adored the poem thought it to be quite a laugh but yet quite passionate
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On Sunday, November 6, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
=) haha.. oh how many times I've said this.. good for you! ~b
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On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
great write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, Empathy
(22) wrote:
The last line was awesome.. Get bent haha!
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
This was amazing, so much anger described so well. I loved it. ~Midnight
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A former member wrote:
i love that this poem rings with a tone of "don't fuck with me." i LOVE the strength you expose in this. nicely done. ....-samone
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, Kali Ma
(43) wrote:
Beautiful - don't let yourself be a pawn. Glad to hear this, full of inner strength. ~ Asheai
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A former member wrote:
"You didn't know I hide my strength at the bottom-" That line was soo great.
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
*scrapes some strenth off poem, and saves for later* i like your might hear.....well done.......urban
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A former member wrote:
CHEERS HER ON!!! *what crimson said*
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
HELL YEA! you tell 'em!