Oblivion

By DarkReality

Everything that I touch turns to ashes
Everything that I love turns to dust
So take my hand as our world crashes
To my oblivion of dark and rust

To shy away would mean forever
To embrace would jusst mean death
And in our likeness we would sever
Any hope that we could connect

Cry not the tears that I've forsaken
Wish not the dreams that I leave dead
For all our courage has been taken
And without hope we are all dead

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Copyright 2005 DarkReality
Published on Wednesday, February 2, 2005.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • worm On Wednesday, July 19, 2017, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    nicely rhymed!

  • Miztaken4beauty On Friday, March 26, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (177)By person wrote:

    Very sing song-y. I like the flow. pretty. and dark :)

  • Moonflower On Friday, March 28, 2008, Moonflower (301)By person wrote:

    melancholy and lovely. i like it alot :)

  • A former member wrote: just beautiful with a closing line that rings true and clear

  • A former member wrote: great write, very morbid and dark...

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, February 3, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    this is excellent...and i deleted my other comment because i realized i screw up on it..hehe..i meant to say that ususally i feel like rhyme holds people back, but for this, its perfection! great write hun! ~AoD

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, February 3, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    oh and Welcome to the Wonderful World of DP!!!

  • A former member wrote: I liked how this seemed to flow and travel very fluidly.

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