Astronomy and Fairy Tales

By Eric

Stranded in time, stranded in fate
Lost with no hope of a conclusion to this state
Looking for love, looking for hope, looking for the things I long for the most
Imagining wonders, imagining dreams, imagining pleasures of unmeasurable means.
Floating thru distance, floating thru life..
My life nearly ending, will I soon depart?
No sooner, did life cease in my heart.... Life will go on... And I will.... restart...

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Copyright 2003 Eric Scott Diaz
Published on Tuesday, January 25, 2005.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this flowed and was rythmic and so simple yet so complex its just beautiful

  • A former member wrote: just remember (karma...it's a bitch) ;)

  • Eric On Wednesday, January 13, 2010, Eric (77)By person wrote:

    uh thank you?

  • urbanhumility On Monday, June 30, 2008, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    these words are far-reaching in there nature....beautiful in its unoticed asking..........well done........urban

  • just breath On Saturday, March 31, 2007, just breath (39)By person wrote:

    beautifully written

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, January 11, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    This was an enjoyable ride and I loved the title.

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Thursday, August 25, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    good flow & rhyme... forget about love and all that BS though... embrace the darkness as your lover and rise above mediocrity! =D

  • blue On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    hmmm...I really liked this, great rhythm, wonderful message!! ~b

  • A former member wrote: i like the flow of this a lot!

  • Dei On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    that was cool

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