Dark Ethereal World

By Trail of Fiends

Skeletons shaking
Bones fed up with spiritual dust
Lust and madness at every touch
Purple skies and unshaped forms
Time freezes and in a sudden burst
Vanishes the inhuman and primitive world
To a dark ethereal circle
Where walls are listening and roofs are falling
Where demons and creatures abrupt from nowhere
Burning eyes and floating bodies
Smoke and the smells of auto-destruction
The imperative toys of the human beings
That see unconsciousness as a forgetting gun

It's a coward coma?
Or a pleasant trip?

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Copyright 2005 Ornamented Flesh
Published on Tuesday, January 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Thursday, September 1, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    exxxcellent... the imagery is fantastical, horrifying, chaotic... i'm loving it

  • A former member wrote: hmmm. quite impressive really, you have a good grip on illustration, yet also seem to know when to leave an image sketchy. i enjoyed this, at any rate.

  • knightmirror On Thursday, January 27, 2005, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    good lord dude...you are good....how old are you???...not that it matters...but you are full of wisdom....keep them coming...i shall keep learning what you have seen in your soul and describe flawlessly through your emotive descriptions....-knight

  • Trail of Fiends On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37)By person wrote:

    I really don't know what you can possible learn from me. But really flathered for that. Thanks.

  • A former member wrote: Sweet..I really like this one...your style s good

  • Trail of Fiends On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37)By person wrote:

    Thank you for those words.

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