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If looks could kill...
By Bleeding Tree
If looks could kill
Where would we be
Would you be afraid
To look at me
If looks could kill
Would I die
Would you send me to hell
Cause your eyes couldn't lie
If looks could kill
Would I kill myself
Out of lonliness
Cause there was no one else
If looks could kill
We would all kill each other
No one would be spared
Not sister, nor brother
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Copyright 2004 Bleeding Tree
Published on Friday, November 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "If looks could kill..."
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On Monday, November 29, 2004, blue
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wrote:
hmmm...profound, this is an excellent thought provoking poem! A+
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A former member wrote:
good write
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, Vexed
(74) wrote:
I like the truth in it. To think how many times I would have killed my brother, mother and father and well over half my friends. jeez, that is some good poem.
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A former member wrote:
Great write! I really like the ending! And it has a great flow to it!
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
i liked the ending to this, and the overall flow of your words.. unique meaning behind this, great write..
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