If looks could kill...

By Bleeding Tree

If looks could kill
Where would we be
Would you be afraid
To look at me

If looks could kill
Would I die
Would you send me to hell
Cause your eyes couldn't lie

If looks could kill
Would I kill myself
Out of lonliness
Cause there was no one else

If looks could kill
We would all kill each other
No one would be spared
Not sister, nor brother

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Copyright 2004 Bleeding Tree
Published on Friday, November 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • blue On Monday, November 29, 2004, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    hmmm...profound, this is an excellent thought provoking poem! A+

  • A former member wrote: good write

  • Vexed On Friday, November 26, 2004, Vexed (74)By person wrote:

    I like the truth in it. To think how many times I would have killed my brother, mother and father and well over half my friends. jeez, that is some good poem.

  • A former member wrote: Great write! I really like the ending! And it has a great flow to it!

  • BeautifulCalamity On Friday, November 26, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    i liked the ending to this, and the overall flow of your words.. unique meaning behind this, great write..

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