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By dark faery

I am so mad but yet sad. Because I keep thinking of the times we had. I never felt like this for anyone before.
I guess I was just your fucking whore. You told me how you felt. And I fell to peices.

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Copyright 2004 blbhd
Published on Sunday, November 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • XXYYZZ On Thursday, May 10, 2012, XXYYZZ (12)By person wrote:

    Which is why I've learnt to never let them in. But then again, I wonder, how long will I be able to pretend?

  • Lynaes On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    there does need to be so much more.. you say you're mad.. you're sad.. express WHY you feel those things. How they make you feel physically, emotionally.. this is like a skeleton.. it's up to you to put the flesh on it.

  • Lynaes On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    there's just limitless potential in your words, don't let yourself fall shorter than what you can poetically achieve.

  • Butterfly On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    "I guess I was just your fucking whore" Powerful...But I must agree with loserland...It needs more.

  • Loserland On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    not bad really....i just..i dunno..need MORE!

  • Savannah On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    I feel for you, truly I do

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