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By dark faery
I am so mad but yet sad. Because I keep thinking of the times we had.
I never felt like this for anyone before.
I guess I was just your fucking whore. You told me how you felt. And
I fell to peices.
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Copyright 2004 blbhd
Published on Sunday, November 14, 2004.
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On Thursday, May 10, 2012, XXYYZZ
(12)
wrote:
Which is why I've learnt to never let them in. But then again, I wonder, how long will I be able to pretend?
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
there does need to be so much more.. you say you're mad.. you're sad.. express WHY you feel those things. How they make you feel physically, emotionally.. this is like a skeleton.. it's up to you to put the flesh on it.
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
there's just limitless potential in your words, don't let yourself fall shorter than what you can poetically achieve.
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
"I guess I was just your fucking whore" Powerful...But I must agree with loserland...It needs more.
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Loserland
(113) wrote:
not bad really....i just..i dunno..need MORE!
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
I feel for you, truly I do
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