I truley love you

By dark faery

Im so tired of how I feel.
My love for you is so real.
Right now things are so hard and Im not sure of what to do.
All I know is my heart is broke and lost with out you.
All alone so empty without a clue.
All I know is I truely Love you.

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Copyright 2004 blbhd
Published on Sunday, November 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i can relate to all your work I LOVE IT!!! :D great job.

  • Butterfly On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Butterfly (99)By person wrote:

    This is so touching. So simple but not. I like it.

  • A Broken Soul On Sunday, November 14, 2004, A Broken Soul (80)By person wrote:

    yeah, this is pretty basic, but i like how forward it is. i can definetly relate to the fourth line... ^Autumn^

  • Loserland On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    pretty simple

  • Savannah On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    I hope whoever this is for reads it, because it is beautiful

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