Breaking

By Syn

The way you weave into my dreams
and hauntingly consume me...
its breaking me

Theres a distance between us now
it will not last
it cannot last

Im breaking
trying
hoping
needing

Needing this...
needing this night
needing you

Im wrong
out of place
out of sorts

But its you...
breaking me.

Hold me close to you
touch me
breathe your life into me

Before I break again
Reflect yourself within me

Its too soon...
But you mesmerize me
amaze me

"It is what it is..."
"You know...One thing at a time"

How can I take one thing at a time...
When youre everything...
And youre crashing in on me, breaking me.

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Saturday, October 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Silent Assassin On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    I felt you with every word. It poured out with such emotion. Very great write!

  • A former member wrote: Flawless . . powered by such beautiful emotion. Wonderful. ~ Rose ~

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, October 30, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    (un)holy death! this is quite intense.. wow.. truly killer.. I can so relate to this wicked feeling.. The last lines are perfect.. -Michael

  • Zhee On Saturday, October 30, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    intense and strong.... a beautifully emotional piece.. lovely work...

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