Those Eyes

By Zahtsk

     Soften eyes upon mine soul
Those dark pools seek to learn.
To pierce the drought of my heart's hole,
That dark chasm of echoing chambers,
With stone floors that still tremble
That chattering effect that causes the walls to tumble.
Behind those walls, stocks of sulfur wait
A posed hand overhead, a match in hand.
My heart engaged and for the first time;
I know that what I long to see is that look:
The joy and pleasure in those dark soft eyes.

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Copyright 2004 Zahtsk
Published on Tuesday, October 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: those eyes...i bow too

  • Zhee On Wednesday, October 20, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was a lovely write.. captivating...

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, October 20, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    beautiful and so rich in wording and feeling. outstanding and lovely in every way.

  • purr_verse On Tuesday, October 19, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    absolutely gorgeous; soft and enveloping, rich in image and emotion. beautiful write. :)

  • A former member wrote: i agree with kristie in every way.. beautiful

  • A former member wrote: This is gentle and asphyxiating. Wonderful type.

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