Better Man

By Syn

youre on your knees
so eager to please
but give in to these
sanity pleas

your thoughts creep in
and then you begin
doubting within
all that youve been

quiet your mind
and let me inside
let all fleeting thoughts die
unto me do abide

trust my intentions
without apprehension
let go inhibitions
and stray from convention

hold out your hand
nevermind these bands
heed my demands
you'll be a better man

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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Wednesday, October 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Silent Assassin On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, Silent Assassin (108)By person wrote:

    The flow of this poem was incredible. Very well done.

  • DarkWolf On Saturday, October 9, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Wickedly done Syn. I feel this could be a great song.. love the design and the idea expressed. Very cool. -Michael

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