The Ecstasy of Love
By FallenFaith
What is more beautiful,
than sex?
Nothing is more intimate,
nothing is so pure,
sex is not sin,
sex is the closest to god,
you or I will ever be,
when at the moment,
of bodily ecstasy,
you are one with god,
you are god,
you forget yourself,
and there is no evil,
with sex comes power,
and power needs constraints,
for unharnessed power,
causes only problems,
when you give yourself,
give it wisely,
the physical pleasure,
may be stronger when nonhindered,
by emotional conflictions,
but casual sex,
does not relinquish the soul,
for the stongest force of sex,
is a spiritual one,
when at the moment,
you know you have given,
all that you have,
to that other being,
your souls slip away,
to dance in the moonlight,
and the two of you,
collapse,
in the ecstasy of love.
Comments on "The Ecstasy of Love"
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A former member wrote:
I disagree ][ ][
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A former member wrote:
what an expired member said. It shows what love should be. Although I have no religion, I do not consider anything a sin, but that is offtopic. Very nice. Very true.
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful. ^_^ This shows how sex should truly be; with one that you love. Not strangers from clubs or off the streets. I love it.
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On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, Rone4611
(123) wrote:
Yay! Free love! Bring back the 60's! jk, I loved tihs, awesome poem.
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
This is wonderful. I think though that the physical pleasure is strongest when the intimacy and love are deepest.. Does not shallow love bring shallow pleasure? -michael
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Foreplay is indeed the key to the best sex.. the longer you can prolong the act the more intense the climax.. Also there is nothing like looking into each others eyes at the point of orgasm.. -michael
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
lol loving the comparisons... lets keep em rollin.. anyone.. anyone
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
and elisa2.. phbbbbbtt... :P
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
here's one i put my finger on recently...Sex is like writing...I just kinda hold the thought in my head as long as I can and let it swim around for awhile......
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
it always works it way slowly down my hand and into my ~writing~.........and when I ~wield~ the ~words~ just right...... I can bring that feeling to the perfect ~pressing point~......
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
as a ~celestify thundering~ of *aaaahhhhh*.....where the words ~come~ as beautiful poetry....U feelin me;)
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
ooooh *shivers* niiice
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Sin
(1168) wrote:
sex is like a guitar, foreplay is the strings, anyone can beat on the guitar and make some form of music but to play the strings and make beautiful music takes an artist..this piece was full of truth and emotion..i loved it ~kristy
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
very well written.. you expressed wonderfully the divinity of it all... though personally.. I enjoy foreplay more than the actual act. its like a map of the entire world...
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
what a coincidence that's exactly what he said.....and he certainly meant it;) elisa
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, FallenFaith
(44) wrote:
i agree oldie, the longer you can prolong foreplay, the longer the orgasms seem.
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
where each location requires its own special behavior... learn the customs.. speak the language... I own paupa new guinea :::OLd
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
this re-animated the most beautiful moment in my life.....just breathtaking....~elisa