The Key to Me

By Soulseeker

The Key to Me

** The only art my hands ever made any sense of..**


Welcome to Bethany...

A soul dressed in black and white..
Sometimes cotton.. sometimes lace..
The darkness fades but chokes
me more than the light ever seemed to..

Here the soul sits perched on a glass,
a glass of opportunities..
Where I can fall in and drown..
or remain perched and proud..

A few tears to show the world
the realitiy of life..
and the hardships a soul may carry..
With fights of emotions..
the ones that usually win..

A rose added for beauty..
Frail in full bloom..
Set to remind me how to control my ego..
I'll never be in the same vicinity of the rose
nor do I ever want to be..

The wings are symbolic to my lack of roots
and my habit of losing ground..

The burns?
Now what exactly is a soul or
a human
without any burn?
Without any scar?


Let's ponder on the title now....

K
E
Y

No, I never handed you a tangible key..
I never had to..
A Key to Me
comes with every post,
from every word ...

Now there a choices you hold..
To better your intellect
and drop the judgemental stance..
or ignore it all together..

You could run away
without so much as a second glance to me..
or
come to terms with reality..

This is my Thanks to MOST of DP
for not being afraid to show
real emotions
and true selves..
The key for me
to glance among souls..
and relate or debate..
For every post..
for every word..
It meant a lot....









You'll never need me to hand you any key..
all you need
is to escape ...


from the artifical smile..





Unlock the door....



now

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Copyright 2004 Soulseeker
Published on Friday, October 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Mistress Shadow On Monday, November 7, 2005, Mistress Shadow (249)By person wrote:

    Truely amazing. Hopefully you'll share more of yourself in the near furture. ~T~

  • Mr King On Thursday, June 9, 2005, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    key

  • Savannah On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    This was an insightful look into your thoughts... wonderful work

  • A former member wrote: the write with the picture makes a heady concoction. this post seems like heaven coz im very high

  • Angel With The Scabbed Wings On Monday, November 1, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (40)By person wrote:

    wow that was amazing. you upgraded to gold member ooooo ahhhhh oooo. i still love your work

  • A former member wrote: hell yeah. excellent write indeed, wonderful work.

  • Railway_Butterfly On Saturday, October 30, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (353)By person wrote:

    oh wow...I love the picture,I think thats fantastic...

  • Zhee On Saturday, October 30, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    this was absolutely beautiful...~The wings are symbolic to my lack of roots and my habit of losing ground.. ~ loved it!

  • ShadowFlight On Friday, October 29, 2004, ShadowFlight (105)By person wrote:

    Your literary use of "a glass of opportunity" was wonderfully profound... a superb work from the heart *and* soul

  • Sin On Friday, October 29, 2004, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this is simply lovely,i could hear your sincerity in every word, and the fairy is beautiful ~kristy

  • FallenFaith On Friday, October 29, 2004, FallenFaith (44)By person wrote:

    Bethany this is beautiful. Goin straight to my favorites.

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