My Response

By Soulseeker

Your input on love awoke new sensations;
though such lust could be an imitation.
(We will overlook that for today)
The first to write a song for me discreetly directed,
and with such thoughts my soul is infected.
Gaps of distance may be between,
but that didn't stop me from having the DREAM!
Random thoughts of hammocks at 1:32,
and you swore you wasn't easy to woe.
(Yeah ha ha)
I am glad to see you accept me as a whole,
and it's a relief to find another 17 year old with a soul.
I now breath Autum's crisp fumes,
with vivid dreams of hot tea and you.
(Winter snow is just pushing it buddy!)
Please don't dread a departure yet,
afterall all we just met.
(Besides that, you aren't too far out of reach)
I "reckon" I am thrilled my accent makes you smile,
maybe it'll keep you laughing awhile.
I am really not sure where this is all going,
the point I am proving, or what I am showing.
(THIS IS MY RESPONSE)
Here's to "black bracelets";
snowy roads and CD's (I wish, I wish, I wish);
Hot air ballons;
Snakes VS. Horses
1273
New 'Jersey'
Beads in the nose
and how customers are always right!
But more importantly this is to you as a whole,
for the only one who's intellect brushed my soul...
AKA Crazy Cole
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Faith

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Copyright 2004 Soulseeker
Published on Friday, September 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Whisper On Saturday, September 25, 2004, Whisper (116)By person wrote:

    Beautiful! ~Whisper~

  • FallenFaith On Friday, September 24, 2004, FallenFaith (45)By person wrote:

    I want to say something meaningful but i am overtaken. I "reckon" we are getting married whether you like it or not.

  • FallenFaith On Friday, September 24, 2004, FallenFaith (45)By person wrote:

    I am speechless. Words would do no good.WOW

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