My Death Place

By Dark Goth

Here I go again
When I Die this will be my Hell
As the flame rises higher
I drown in the Lake of Fire
I feel pain and I want it all to quit
But I still fall into a bottomeless pit
I can't believe this
It's like a horrible tempest
No one will hear my screams
A place of everlasting burnings
A furnace of fire
A devouring fire
Painful moments
A place of torments
No sign of light and no sign of hope
A place of everlasting punishment
Dark shadows remain here
A place where people never pray
I remain here to die and stay
A place with no cry for mercy
A place that smells stale
A place where they wail
One thing I do everyday
A place where they curse God
This place I will be sent
A place where they never repent
No one is ever clean
Everyone is mean
A place of filthiness
A place of weeping
A place of sorrows
A place of outer darkness
This feels like a hard test
A place where they have no rest
This battle is never won
A place where they gnaw their tongues
This place I'm Remembering Never
A place of blackness and darkness forever
The Fire is not quenched
Tormented with brimstone
You can smell the smoke of their torment
And the screams of each painful moment

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Copyright 2004 darkgoth
Published on Saturday, October 2, 2004.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • yslehc On Saturday, October 2, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    this one doesnt sound like your other ones.. weird.. its good though.. kinda scary.... but good.... i dont want you to be there either

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