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Seeking A Lost World In Pinpoint Pupils…
By Zhee
Striving to incise this veil
Covering your comatose core,
The disease ridden glory
You have prostrated before...
Stench of putrid fear rains
Acrid on your shallow breaths,
Track embellished veins ooze
Funerals of your million deaths.
Succumbs the flailing heart
Choking on the morphine tear,
Life collapses behind the curtain
Of your paralyzed miotic stare....
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Friday, September 24, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, knightmirror
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wrote:
my goodness.....i should read more of your works more often.....i'm extremely impressed...****-knight
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
a bit haunting is what this is...love your writes...
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Lappin it up...This is well put together, well done...excuse the coarse comment...
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On Saturday, September 25, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
these words are chilling and course through me in a haunting way
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A former member wrote:
I like this so much, I'm crushed. It makes me feel so small, so insignificant, so... I just don't know. If I blink, I am embraced by your words there. ~Shane~
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
Wonderful write. ~Whisper~
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