Pinned

By MGood

My acceptance of your beauty,
Has pinned me belly up.
Still I wait in fearful ecstasy,
Hoping you'll disrupt.

Exposed and dominated,
With an occasional soft touch.
Fear has contaminated,
While love has shown too much.

So, I lie before you humbly,
My force slowly withdrawn.
Clutching only honestly,
I can hold through night 'til dawn.

If submission is what you wanted,
To satisfy your thought.
I hope that you were taunted,
When given what you got.

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Published on Saturday, November 4, 2000.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Monday, June 27, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    this was hot and brilliant. Great flow!!

  • Invader Lyn On Tuesday, July 6, 2004, Invader Lyn (48)By person wrote:

    This is really sexy, in a subtle way. I really like it. The last two lines are really powerful and effective. Great write!

  • flying_fox On Monday, March 1, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    you have a great meter in this type of work...great flow, powerful words...nice bit of spite at the end. FF

  • A former member wrote: beautiful

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