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I wonder what it's like not to feel
By so_skeevy
All the hurt and all the sorrow
All the wonder about tomorrow
All your pain and all your fear
They're all gone, your mind is clear
And you find as you take that final breath
That happiness is attained only in death
No one will ever understand
The relief you needed had to be planned
Dont feel bad; its not your fault
Its all the anger the world has wrought
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Copyright 2004 so_skeevy
Published on Tuesday, September 21, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "I wonder what it's like not to feel"
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A former member wrote:
I love the rhythm and the emotion of this poem. Very moving...
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A former member wrote:
I like the flow of this poem.....and when the weight of the world is on your shoulders the only thing to do is shrug
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, OLd SouL
(717)
wrote:
or maybe its your perception and your reactions... nevertheless... it was a good write. :::OLd
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Very cool.. I like the wording. Peace in Death.. lovely. -Michael
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
well done......urban
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
???? ok. this appears to be a suicide type poem thing. nicely written and it flows well though
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