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Demons
By Syn
Backed into this corner
Demons feeding on my mind
slither 'round into my eyes
and climbing from behind
These demons torment with their words
and taint my precious soul
charismatic chants hypnotize
consuming my control
I give into these deadly beasts
spread eagled open wide
If not for their eternal life
To death I'd be a bride
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Copyright 2004 Syn
Published on Monday, August 9, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Demons"
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On Monday, August 9, 2004, DoctorAsh
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wrote:
Well written - there is nothing like a good conflict between rival brain streams [good for evil] nicely done [D&A]
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On Monday, August 9, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
A couple of the lines sound forced, but I like how compact they are. "Spread eagled open wide" is a very good description of vulnerability, for example. Not bad at all. Keep writing.
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On Monday, August 9, 2004, Zara Synn
(57) wrote:
"To death I'd be a bride" I love the way you put that.
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A former member wrote:
i really liked this poem. it all flowed so well and every seemed to just "fit". excellent write
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