~Sugar Coated Lie!~ Featuring MasochisticPrincess

By Daegonna

"I think I love you" she said, he just smiled blindly ignoring the sugar coatedness of it and thinking I own her now,She thinks she loves me ha! I know it's a lie she should too. Now she belongs to me".

He stole her soul not all of it a one time but peiece by piece he stole her being, her thoughts always turned to him when she was approched by men she would walk on freezing them in their tracks her friend, they knew whta was going on they knew what was stealing parts of her by the day, then it finally happened her friends sawher abd they saw nothing but a slave a slave to the man who had stole her soul and she was blind to except for when she stole just a little of it back at night she stole a bit and then she would wish she had someone to get her soul back for her and save her from this man since her soul wasn't her own anymore they had to share it she couldn't use it though only him... then one day her rescuer came to the house he saw her and she was finally able to scream "HELP!" and he realized thats all he could do was help this poor broken women so the next night he went but her husband found out and he beat her rescuer down he bruised and broken him so bbadly then he turned to her and he screamed "Is this how you repay me?! Do you repay me by running away with any guy that comes to the door selling something?! he screamed at her and she just fell to her knees on the floor at the feet of her broken rescuer crying for all the trouble she'd caused for him and and mainly for herself. she knew this was wrong because her rescuer was hurt physically and she was only hurt mentally and she knew she should help him but she didnt know how she could hurt so badly without being physically harmed. so she ran. she hopped on a train, taking with her only the clothes on her back she cried during the entire train ride she maimed her lost soul the soul that was bled until it was black. she tortured herself she made herself hurt she cried every night until her heart had cried itself but she never looked back. she never once thought of the husband she left behind and she tried to not think of her rescuer laying there helplessly on the floor pleading for her safety as he laid there broken but sometimes she couldnt help but think of it and she ended up crying herself to sleep when it did catch up with her nd other times she tried forget and drank until dawn other times to forget she sliced the pain away until her entire body was numb and in the end she realized

THIS WAS ALL THE FAULT OF ONE LITTLE SUGAR COATED LIE called LOVE!

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Copyright 2004 Daegonna
Published on Friday, August 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Short Story"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Saturday, July 28, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    This is a truth, hard to face. As hard as it is to face, remember that you felt these emotions for sure; although the other person may not have, take pride in your own feelings. It took great courage to write this. I hope you find truths you can find security in. Great ink.

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